This is very helpful criticism as many historical fiction writers, including myself, grapple with modernised dialogue and the whole "show don't tell" debate. A well-crafted review, Jonathan.
A great and thoughtful review. This is on my list so great to hear your thoughts. I'm certainly interested for the political side, and interesting to hear about the language modernisation and family aspects. A very helpful review as always :)
Thank you so much, Amy. I truly appreciate your kind words and support. I've been putting real effort into sharpening the focus of my reviews, and I owe a great deal to @annkennedysmith. Her post on what makes a strong review has been genuinely transformative. Whenever I start to meander, I revisit her guidance, bringing me back to the heart of what matters.
This is very helpful criticism as many historical fiction writers, including myself, grapple with modernised dialogue and the whole "show don't tell" debate. A well-crafted review, Jonathan.
A great and thoughtful review. This is on my list so great to hear your thoughts. I'm certainly interested for the political side, and interesting to hear about the language modernisation and family aspects. A very helpful review as always :)
Thank you, Maddy! I'm eager to hear your thoughts when you read it.
Wow amazing review. I'm in awe of how well your reviews are. Keep up the great work. Very nice to have an honest look.
Thank you so much, Amy. I truly appreciate your kind words and support. I've been putting real effort into sharpening the focus of my reviews, and I owe a great deal to @annkennedysmith. Her post on what makes a strong review has been genuinely transformative. Whenever I start to meander, I revisit her guidance, bringing me back to the heart of what matters.